*yaaay* improvement *yay*

So I got my last homework on paragraphing back and it waaas a....  *drum roll*.... two...(minus : P). So much better than my last homework. So I guess (or I hope) that I've learned from my mistakes - at least from some of them : P.

As always we have to write an improved version..so here it is:

"Having looked at a number of monolingual print dictionaries in class this week, I have decided that such dictionaries are not for me. Even the smaller print dictionaries are very heavy and too bulky to carry them with me all the time. I’m not always at home when I need a dictionary- so if I needed one, for example when I’m in the Office Pub talking English with my friends and I can’t think of a certain word, I wouldn’t have one at hand. Also, compared to Internet search it takes quite some time to look for a word in a book that consists of so many pages, even if it’s alphabetically organized. Once you’ve found the word you were looking for, the explanations and example sentences are certainly very helpful, but I’d still rather use my favorite online dictionary than buy something expensive which offers the same information. I do agree that investing in print dictionaries will never be in vain; but why pay money for something that is unpractical and expensive if you have other options as well."